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Diamond Dee Loves to Read

My life is books.

Currently reading

Lumberjanes, Vol. 1
Noelle Stevenson, Grace Ellis, Brooke A. Allen
Escape from Mr. Lemoncello's Library
Chris Grabenstein
Resonance (Dissonance)
Erica O'Rourke
The Turn of the Screw and The Aspern Papers
Henry James, Anthony Curtis

The Loved, The Lost, The Dreaming

The Loved, The Lost, The Dreaming - Michelle Browne A copy of this book was given to me by the author. This does not affect my opinion.

Ok, I DNF this book. I only read the first story, a very small portion of the overall work. So I'm not writing a review or leaving a star rating.

I will say why it didn't work for me though.

-There were quite a few editing errors, misspelled words and grammatical errors which distracted me from the story.
-A lot of the slang was confusing to me, what country are they in? (Just curious, lol)
-I was not sure if the MC was a male or female. She/he talks about having a gf but also a ex boyfriend, so that could've been clearer.
-Some awkward sentences like '...after all, we are teenagers, ' (and other sentences that didn't make sense)

- With a strong editor, this could've been a lot better. If it gets edited properly, I'd pick it up again.